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Old but definitely not cold :)

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fun friend magnets, one hot chick

Photo by Gale E

 

One Hot Chick

It’s normal in life so I’m told

To journey from young into old

Where hot flashes reign

With ointments for pain …

Still sweet, sexy, saucy – with soul!

♥   ♥   ♥

The above is my submission for the Writing 201: Poetry – see  guidelines below.

Your prompt: journey | Today’s form: limerick | Today’s device: alliteration

NB: Found it very hard to include all of the required elements but in the end, was pleased with the result 😀

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Author: galeweithers

Barbadian mother of teenager; lover of loud laughter amidst tears; happy to follow God's lead while writing a word or two (and winning national awards) to make a difference in the lives of others.

11 thoughts on “Old but definitely not cold :)

  1. G’day again Galeweithers,
    That is so clever, I do so love a good giggle and you have certainly given me that, thank you

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  2. Your poem has an surprise right out the gate. Hot Chicks makes you think one way but the surprise is it isn’t what your first thought is. You did a great job. Blessings.

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  3. Beautiful.
    It tells of life’span journey
    The older one get, the more the pain;physical, emotional etc and as you rightly put it, there is always ‘ointment for the pain’
    I love the flow.

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  4. Loved the brightness of mood in this, nicely done 🙂

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